we have been making persuasive writing
I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Wednesday, October 20, 2021
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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ReplyDeleteMj I like the details you put and the pictures hop you enjoy. timaru bye hope you have great day. :D
ReplyDeleteHello Marvin.
ReplyDeleteIt's been several years since I went to the Timaru Carnival.I used to enjoy watching my dad on the shooting gallery.He was VERY good at winning prizes.
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