Thursday, August 12, 2021

 Boom!! Shards Of   glass flow in my direction. The planets were the only thing to pack . Dad went to start the car. We were going to get a new house. We got there  in 10 minutes. I was so excited  The house was bigger than our original house


 Dad went to unpack the box. I asked him if he needed help. He said no it is okay for you to explore the house first. I was an explorer. I saw something shine in the darkness in the attic. I went to see what  it was. Some light reached the attic and I saw a mirror glow. Through the mirror I saw people fighting  the king, he fell to his feet in battle. After they failed to slay the king they become his slave. Year after year people become slaves to the king. If you  win in his saddam you can give everyone their soul back. It looks like I got stuck in the mirror  when I was reading. I went to fight the king. I challenged the king to fight me. I got blood on my arm from trying to dodge the king's attacks. The blood dripped down my arm the final dodge pull my sword out of the Chase slayed the emprove  i could see all the soul he his take flying back to the people i got back home nearly in a hool piece 


1 comment:

  1. Super story Marvin.You used some really interesting words.When I first started reading I thought it was a true story.I then read on and realised it was fiction.
    Well done.

    What have you been doing during lock down?.
    I planted some potatoes into tubs and wedded some of the garden.

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